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Jul. 31st, 2005 @ 12:05 am Part 10: Severus.
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Date:August 2nd, 2005 07:31 pm (UTC)
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I'm such a bad reader. I've been following this avidly and haven't commented yet. One word really sums up this story and the lovely union of two such delicious writing: "Guh!"

Really, this story is so deliciously sensuous, and there hasn't really been any naughty behavior yet. Well, not too much, anyway.

Are you done entertaining me, Mr Potter? Or would you like to rest a little more?' Severus' voice was cruel, gently mocking, and he didn't have to feign his sneer.

I adored this line. It is perfect as an end. But really, Snape is such a dissembler. We all know he wants little Harry to rest some more. There's no doubt he was entertained though. :: wicked grin ::

I love this. And the comment porn.