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Jul. 12th, 2005 @ 10:20 am Part 6: Severus.
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Date:July 19th, 2005 03:01 pm (UTC)
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Tiny nitpick: 'A moment later, Potter, you'll regret it.'

I think you need an 'and' in there, to make 'and you'll regret it.' Otherwise, the regretting sound inevitable.
Date:July 19th, 2005 03:06 pm (UTC)
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Ooh, thanks for pointing that out!


--But yeah, with Snape, the regretting kinda is inevitable. :P