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Jul. 31st, 2005 @ 12:05 am Part 10: Severus.
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From:phaballa
Date:July 31st, 2005 03:42 am (UTC)
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and Severus realised that mere tasks would not break Potter's pride, mulish brat that he was.
Not mere tasks...


Onto the spanking!

So. The end? Love. I can't wait to read the next bit, see how Harry reacts to being caught like that. And as always, your Snape voice remains perfect. The internal dialogue is really good too--I like that he's conflicted and struggling and denying what he wants. It's such a nice change from the Snape I usually read in fandom--the one that's utterly confident and seems to know everything about everything despite what we know about Snape from canon (that he's ugly and unpopular and sort of catty and probably has not had sex in a Very Long Time). It feels more realistic to me this way. Nicely done :)