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Jul. 12th, 2005 @ 10:20 am Part 6: Severus.
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From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:21 am (UTC)

Re: *loves back*

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*laughs* I was just starting on writing some porn based on this (dedicated to you, of course), but I certainly don't mind adding it to the fic in the future! (Provided we can get Harry to do something silly enough to earn this punishment--perhaps Snape's trying to teach him to take better care of the... Potions instruments after Harry accidentally breaks a few. 'Obviously, Mr Potter, you haven't been taught the value of things. I'm going to ensure that you never treat my property carelessly. Ever. Again.')
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:25 am (UTC)

Re: *loves back*

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Or we could do more comment-porn. Uh.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:27 am (UTC)

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Like I'm capable of saying no.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:14 am (UTC)

*tempts*

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*knocks on your office door and slides in five minutes late, flushed and out-of-breath, robes open and tie loosened*

Er. Sorry I'm late, sir.
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:22 am (UTC)

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Don't tell me you're sorry, boy. What could have possibly kept you at this time of the night?

*narrows eyes, takes in the loosened tie*

--You were with Weasley, weren't you?
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:26 am (UTC)

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--Wait, wait. I just got an idea. How about co-writing this like 'Nights Nothings'? A few paragraphs from Harry's perspective, alternated with a few paragraphs from Snape's... That'd save us the formatting, and would make a 'proper' fic, instead of, say, comment-porn.

And d'you want to start with being late to detention, or breaking the vials? (Or exploding the cauldron, or whatever?) We could launch straight into the punishment, if you'd like... ;)

Or we could have the build-up. Tasty either way.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:35 am (UTC)

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Man, I never SEE these when you reply to your own comments. Hrmph.

Sure. Proper fic. How strange. Ummmm... starting. God, I don't know. Brain is mush, remember? Tell me what to do.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:28 am (UTC)

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Er. Well, yeah. We were doing Astronomy prep in the tower, sir, and I guess-- it took longer to get down here than I thought. I'm not that late.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:26 am (UTC)

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[insert my usual flailing here]

Well, if you want to write it on its own, far be it from me to stop you. My brain stopped functioning a while back.

But I can't imagine it will be difficult to get Harry to break shit. I think he's going to be pretty jumpy around Snape. And, ha. Snape could startle him on purpose so he drops things. And then, obviously, he'll need to be punished.

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From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:39 am (UTC)

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My brain stopped functioning a while back.

Oh god, same here. All I can feel--I mean see--now is Snape standing behind Harry, sliding the vial in and out as Harry shakes and gasps, trying to hold himself still... And Harry's hard, so hard, but he's more terrified than he's ever been in his life--and Snape's murmuring in his ear, bringing up a palm to grasp Harry's throat:

'You like this, don't you? It's supposed to be a punishment, Potter, you're not supposed to be hard--but you always need something inside you, don't you? Does it even matter what it is?'

And then Snape--twists it--and Harry rises to his toes and whines. His eyes are wide and dark, and sweat beads his forehead...

'Little whore,' Snape whispers. 'Perhaps I should let you come like this--let you feel the glass crack the moment you do, until you can feel it, piercing you, cutting you as you cry out--'

[And then Harry comes, of course, sobbing helplessly, but nothing happens except for Snape's hand tightening on his throat, and--and-- FUCK, my brain's DEAD now--]

*draws a shaky breath*
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:49 am (UTC)

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OMFG.

MY MIND CAN'T STOP KINKING.

I HAVE TO WRITE THIS. I HAVE TO WRITE THIS NOW.

*moans*

Please?
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:06 am (UTC)

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OMG why are you asking me? WRITE.

Er, unless you really DO want to do it comment-porn style. Which I suppose is on me. Gimme a sec, then you can decide.
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:10 am (UTC)

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*waits impatiently*
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 10:18 pm (UTC)

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Fuck, Switch, I can't stop kinking about this either. It's the hand on his throat that gets me. l;asjdg;lkjsdglk
From:switchknife
Date:July 15th, 2005 03:35 pm (UTC)

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EEEE IT'S UP AT PORNISH.

Will you hate it? Will you like it?

*wrings hands*
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From:saldemonium
Date:July 14th, 2005 03:43 am (UTC)

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Holy Fuck! You killed my brain, too. Guh.
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 03:49 am (UTC)

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*eats brains for breakfast*

:D

Just hang in there--I'm working on the porn for this thing!
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From:saldemonium
Date:July 14th, 2005 03:50 am (UTC)

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*eyes her wife*

You give me naughty ideas, you know. *evil grin*
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From:danxsunday
Date:July 14th, 2005 06:29 am (UTC)

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Switch....you made me come here....you made me read this. I couldn't help it you know.
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 06:35 am (UTC)

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Hee, for a second I thought you meant that I made you--come here, as in. Uh. Never mind.

Coming here's good enough! :D

Alas, I have to go offline again, but when I return, I'll return with porn...
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From:danxsunday
Date:July 14th, 2005 06:38 am (UTC)

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I shall wait with baited beath all aquiver
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From:danxsunday
Date:July 14th, 2005 06:38 am (UTC)

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ack that was meant to be breath....see I can't even spell around you
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:43 am (UTC)

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Snape could startle him on purpose so he drops things. And then, obviously, he'll need to be punished.

:D You've got Snape down pat, there. D'you know I actually wrote something similar ages ago? 'A Man of Habit', I think, in which Snape casts secret hexes in class just to make Harry stuff up, and then he assigns Harry detentions (which end in shagging)...
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:46 am (UTC)

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I thought A Man of Habit!Snape only thought about doing that, but it was too risky?

Er, not that I read that story all the time or anything.

I'd respond to your other comment, but I'm dead. *cough*
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:51 am (UTC)

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Really? Hee, that goes to show that I don't know my own stories--yeah, I think you're right. I seem to recall something about being a predator that needed to be fed at timed intervals--if he fed too often, the other staff would start suspecting things...

And you're dead? I'm practically swimming in the Styx!