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Jul. 12th, 2005 @ 10:20 am Part 6: Severus.
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From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 12:29 am (UTC)

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... taking-it fest.

*mind goes a little blank, and very hot*

Taking... it. Harry taking it... On Snape's desk...

*shakes head to dispel images*

You naughty, naughty Atra, you. Using words like that! Now all I can see this truly, horribly perverse image involving--uh--you know, those really long, slim glass vials? Almost as long as a man's forearm? And Harry's all bent over and trembling, because this is his punishment--cool glass and warm oil sliding into him--and Snape's telling him in cruel tones not to push too much, to relax and take it like a good boy, or Harry might get very, very hurt. (Of course, Snape doesn't tell him about the Unbreakable charm... It's so very good to see the boy terrified, panicking, sweat-moistened and gasping and hard.)

*brain-dead*

DAMN YOU. Argh. And damn all those times I handled laboratory test-tubes...
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 12:39 am (UTC)

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Okay. This totally goes into the fic.

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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 12:43 am (UTC)

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Well, you know. Unless you don't want it to.

But OMG, you're killing me. Ngh.
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:21 am (UTC)

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*laughs* I was just starting on writing some porn based on this (dedicated to you, of course), but I certainly don't mind adding it to the fic in the future! (Provided we can get Harry to do something silly enough to earn this punishment--perhaps Snape's trying to teach him to take better care of the... Potions instruments after Harry accidentally breaks a few. 'Obviously, Mr Potter, you haven't been taught the value of things. I'm going to ensure that you never treat my property carelessly. Ever. Again.')
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:25 am (UTC)

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Or we could do more comment-porn. Uh.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:27 am (UTC)

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Like I'm capable of saying no.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:14 am (UTC)

*tempts*

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*knocks on your office door and slides in five minutes late, flushed and out-of-breath, robes open and tie loosened*

Er. Sorry I'm late, sir.
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From:atrata
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:26 am (UTC)

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[insert my usual flailing here]

Well, if you want to write it on its own, far be it from me to stop you. My brain stopped functioning a while back.

But I can't imagine it will be difficult to get Harry to break shit. I think he's going to be pretty jumpy around Snape. And, ha. Snape could startle him on purpose so he drops things. And then, obviously, he'll need to be punished.

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From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:39 am (UTC)

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My brain stopped functioning a while back.

Oh god, same here. All I can feel--I mean see--now is Snape standing behind Harry, sliding the vial in and out as Harry shakes and gasps, trying to hold himself still... And Harry's hard, so hard, but he's more terrified than he's ever been in his life--and Snape's murmuring in his ear, bringing up a palm to grasp Harry's throat:

'You like this, don't you? It's supposed to be a punishment, Potter, you're not supposed to be hard--but you always need something inside you, don't you? Does it even matter what it is?'

And then Snape--twists it--and Harry rises to his toes and whines. His eyes are wide and dark, and sweat beads his forehead...

'Little whore,' Snape whispers. 'Perhaps I should let you come like this--let you feel the glass crack the moment you do, until you can feel it, piercing you, cutting you as you cry out--'

[And then Harry comes, of course, sobbing helplessly, but nothing happens except for Snape's hand tightening on his throat, and--and-- FUCK, my brain's DEAD now--]

*draws a shaky breath*
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:43 am (UTC)

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Snape could startle him on purpose so he drops things. And then, obviously, he'll need to be punished.

:D You've got Snape down pat, there. D'you know I actually wrote something similar ages ago? 'A Man of Habit', I think, in which Snape casts secret hexes in class just to make Harry stuff up, and then he assigns Harry detentions (which end in shagging)...
From:cravache
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:30 am (UTC)

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...um...

cool glass and warm oil sliding into him--and Snape's telling him in cruel tones not to push too much

*whimpers* I, um... uh...

(Of course, Snape doesn't tell him about the Unbreakable charm... It's so very good to see the boy terrified, panicking, sweat-moistened and gasping and hard.)

...I am so fucking kinked right now. *sweats*

You have no idea how much that turns me on. That makes the submissive in me crave.
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:41 am (UTC)

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*grins evilly*

What can I say--I like keeping my subs terrified entertained.
From:cravache
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:52 am (UTC)

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*grins weakly back*

I know you do. You do it so well.

If you were my Dominant...

*goes weak-kneed*

...you have no idea.
From:switchknife
Date:July 14th, 2005 01:53 am (UTC)

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...you have no idea.

Hm, I think I do.

;)
From:cravache
Date:July 14th, 2005 02:03 am (UTC)

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You are so bad.